My oral exposition

Well I going to evaluate my oral exposition:

Presentation: I think that the presentation of the oral was quite good, we have different components of computer and a power point and the time it was near to fiveteen minutes, for thats reasons I think that I have a 9 of 10.

Body language& eye contact: I don't kave so much eye contact... I only look the teacher and I feel a little bit nervous. I think that sometimes I read and I don't have so much movements to hold the attention fo the audience, for all of these things, I have a 4 of 10.

Structure: We have a good structure of the oral presentation. We introduce the topic and asked questions about the topic, moreover we organize the ideas in the order. We use some connectors, and sometimes repeat to help understanding. it was a 8 of 10.

Content: We introduce new information to the audience, a lot of that and detailed. We don't have any quote, but we have point of views and opinions. We show examples with real components and I think that the message of the oral it's clear. I think that I have 30 of 40.

Language: The gramar it's correct, but not complex. The vocabulary is variable and a little bit technic because the names of components are technic names however we don't use any sentence connectors but we use fillers like "well" or "for example". I think that's a 13 of 20.

Ponunciation and intonation: The pronunciation was a little bit poor... I feel really nervous and this is a problem when you go to speack in public. I think I have a 5 of 10.

Evaluation, Mark: I have a 69 of 100.